Thursday, June 5, 2025

The Taking

 


The Taking

Chapter 1: Ordinary Day

Nineteen-year-old Jake wiped the sweat from his forehead as he finished the last of his barn chores. The late afternoon sun cast long shadows across the farmyard as he made his way back to the house, boots crunching on gravel.

He pushed through the kitchen door and called out, "Jeb? You home?"

The sound of muffled struggling came from the living room. Jake rounded the corner and burst out laughing at what he saw: his 21-year-old brother Jeb, shirtless and bound tight—wrists behind his back, ankles tied, elbows pulled together, with gray duct tape sealed across his mouth.

"What the fuck, bro!" Jake doubled over with laughter. "Did your buddies tie you up and leave you here? This is priceless." He pulled out his phone. "I gotta get a picture of this."

But then he noticed Jeb's eyes—wide with terror, frantically trying to communicate something urgent. Before Jake could process what he was seeing, cold steel pressed against his spine.

"Don't move," a rough voice commanded. "Don't make a sound."

Chapter 2: The Taking

Within minutes, Jake found himself in the same position as his brother—shirtless, wrists bound behind his back, ankles tied, elbows pulled painfully together, mouth sealed with tape. He lay on his side next to Jeb, their eyes meeting in shared horror.

Two men ransacked the house while a third kept watch. Jake could hear them growing frustrated.

"There's nothing here, man. No jewelry, no cash, no electronics worth shit."

"Check the office again."

"I'm telling you, these farm boys got nothing."

One of the kidnappers crouched down between the brothers. "Looks like we're doing this the hard way." He produced a syringe. "Sweet dreams, boys."

Jake watched in terror as they injected Jeb first. His brother's struggles grew weaker until his eyes rolled back. Then the needle found Jake's arm, and darkness swallowed him.


The Journey

Jake drifted in and out of consciousness during the drive. Through the drug haze, he felt the pickup truck bouncing over rough roads, heard muffled voices, felt rope cutting into his wrists. Hours seemed to pass before the vehicle finally stopped.

Rough hands dragged them from the truck bed. Jake's legs wouldn't support him—the drugs still coursing through his system. He glimpsed an abandoned barn, rusted equipment, tall grass grown wild around the property.


Unconscious Preparation

The brothers were carried inside and laid on the concrete floor. Still barely conscious,  The kidnappers worked methodically, like they'd done this before.

Jake tried to speak, to move, but his body wouldn't respond. He could only watch through heavy eyelids as the men prepared their elaborate bondage setup—studying the ceiling beams, testing ropes, positioning a wooden branch.


The Binding

When the drugs wore off enough for awareness to return, Jake found himself being lifted and positioned. The kidnappers had perfected their technique.

First, rope was wound tight around his chest and stomach, forcing his already-bound forearms hard against his spine. The pressure was immediate and unforgiving.

A sturdy branch was placed across his back, just under his upper arms. More rope lashed his biceps and triceps to the branch, making his arm muscles bulge and strain. The protruding ends of the branch were connected to hoisting ropes that disappeared into the rafters.

They positioned Jeb the same way, face to face with Jake. More rope bound their necks together, then their ankles. When the hoisting ropes lifted them, they rose together—chests pressed tight, feet dangling six inches off the concrete floor.


Awakening

Full consciousness returned like a splash of ice water. Jake's eyes snapped open to find Jeb's face inches from his own, both of them suspended and completely helpless.

Every muscle in his body screamed. The rope around his chest and stomach made breathing difficult. His bound arms, crushed against his spine by the chest ropes, had gone partially numb. The branch across his back created leverage that turned every small movement into agony.

Jeb's eyes opened moments later, filling with the same dawning horror Jake felt.

"Well, well," came a voice from the shadows. "Look who's awake."

Three men emerged from the darkness—rough, unshaven, with the kind of hard eyes that promised violence.

"Hope you boys are comfortable," the leader said with a cruel smile. "You're gonna be hanging around for a while."

Chapter 3: Ransom Call

The phone rang at the farmhouse. Tom Peterson, the boys' father, answered on the second ring.

"Tom Peterson."

"Listen carefully, old man. We got your boys."

Tom's blood went cold. "What? Who is this?"

"Jake and Jeb are taking a little trip with us. You want them back, it's gonna cost you."

"Please, I—where are they? Are they hurt?"

"That depends on you. One million dollars. Cash."

Tom's legs gave out and he sank into a chair. "A million? I don't have that kind of money. I'm just a farmer. Please, you have to believe me—"

"Bullshit. Rich family like yours, big farm, fancy trucks. Don't play poor with me."

"The farm's mortgaged to the hilt! The trucks are financed! I'm telling you the truth!"

The line went quiet for a moment. Then: "You got 24 hours to find it. Or your boys start screaming."

The call ended. Tom stared at the phone, his world collapsing.

Chapter 4: Live Feed

Tom's phone buzzed with a text: a link to a video stream.

His hands shook as he opened it. The timestamp in the corner showed it was live. The image revealed an abandoned barn, and suspended in the center—his sons.

"No," he whispered. "Oh God, no."

His phone rang again.

"You watching, daddy?"

"Please, they're just kids—"

"One million. Or we start the real fun."

Tom called his brothers first—Sam and Pete, both living on adjacent properties. Then he called his older sons, the 25-year-old twins, Mark and Matt.

"Get over here now," he told each of them. "Bring your rifles."

As they gathered in his kitchen, Tom held up the phone so they could all see the feed. The camera angle showed the boys from behind, revealing the full extent of their bondage.

"Look at how they've got them trussed up," Sam said grimly. "You can see where the ropes wrap around from behind—binding their arms tight against their backs."

Pete pointed at the screen. "See that branch across their backs? Their upper arms are lashed tight to it—that's what's making their shoulder muscles bulge like that."

The twins studied the hoisting ropes connected to each end of the branch. "They're suspended facing each other," Mark observed. "Look how their necks are bound together from behind, ankles too."

"Six inches off the ground," Matt added. "Can't get any leverage, can't relieve the pressure anywhere."

Tom zoomed in on the rope work visible across their backs and shoulders. "Every tie is designed to make them suffer. Look how their bound forearms are forced deep into their spines."

The rear view showed the full extent of their helplessness—two brothers pressed chest to chest, completely immobilized by the intricate ropework.

The live feed showed one of the kidnappers approaching with what looked like a cattle prod.

"We can't wait for police," Tom said, his voice deadly calm. "We track these bastards down ourselves."

Chapter 5: The Hunt

The Peterson family became a war party. Tom, his brothers Sam and Pete, and the twins Mark and Matt—all experienced hunters who knew every inch of the county's back roads and abandoned properties.

They split into two trucks, using the live feed to identify landmarks visible through the barn's dirty windows. Sam recognized the distinctive silo in the background—the old Hutchins place, abandoned for five years.

As they drove, the feed showed the torture beginning. Electric shocks from the cattle prod. Fists to the ribs. The brothers' muffled screams through their tape gags, their bodies jerking helplessly in their bonds.

"Drive faster," Tom growled, no longer thinking like a careful hunter. All strategy abandoned for rage and desperation.

That's when they made their first mistake—roaring down the dirt road instead of approaching silently. The engine noise echoed across the empty farmland, giving them away.

Chapter 6: Crossfire

The gunfight erupted as soon as the trucks pulled up. The kidnappers had heard them coming and taken defensive positions around the barn.

But the Petersons had advantages: night vision scopes, knowledge of the terrain, and decades of hunting experience. They spread out in the darkness, using cover of farm equipment and natural depressions to systematically corner their targets.

The live feed equipment, still running, helped them pinpoint exactly where the boys were suspended inside the barn. But when the shooting started, Jake and Jeb became unwilling human shields, making clean shots nearly impossible.

"I can't get a clear line!" Mark shouted over the gunfire.

One kidnapper used the suspended brothers as cover, firing around Jeb's body while staying hidden behind their bound forms. Pete Peterson took a bullet in the shoulder but kept advancing.

The technology that had tormented them became an advantage—they could see exactly where their boys were hanging, could time their shots between the kidnappers' movements.

The turning point came when Tom flanked around the back of the barn. His hunting experience served him well—he moved silently through the tall grass while the kidnappers focused on the frontal assault.

Three shots. Three kills. The gunfight lasted less than ten minutes.

Chapter 7: No Charges

Sheriff Williams arrived an hour later, his patrol car's headlights cutting through the darkness. He'd known the Peterson family his whole life, had gone to school with Tom.

He surveyed the scene: three dead kidnappers sprawled around the barn, two traumatized boys wrapped in blankets after being cut down from their bonds, a family clustered together in the farmyard.

The sheriff walked through the barn, noted the elaborate suspension setup, the torture implements, the camera equipment still streaming.

"Looks like self-defense to me," he said simply, closing his notepad. "These boys were defending their family. Case closed."

Tom shook his hand. "Thank you, Jim."

"Don't thank me. Thank yourselves for taking care of business. Some things the law can't handle fast enough."

He looked at the two younger boys, still shaking from their ordeal. "You boys are lucky to have family like this."



The Northern Range

 


The Northern Range

Chapter 1: The New Foreman

Jeffery Benson downed the White Claw. He was hot, shirtless. The 20-year-old cowboy son of the owner had just finished his first week as foreman of the northern range of the ranch. He was a slave driver to the ranch hands. He would sit and bark orders and withhold pay if the hands did not meet his expectations, as he would sit and drink beer and play classic rock on his iPhone. What he did not know was the ranch hands had enough. They spiked the White Claw and soon Jeff was asleep in the hay.

"Get the rope and tie him up," Marcus whispered. "Time to make him pay."

Working quickly while Jeff was unconscious, they bound his wrists behind his back with rough hemp rope, then wrapped thick coils around his chest and arms. More rope circled his ankles and thighs. They worked methodically, each man adding another layer of restraint, ensuring their arrogant foreman would wake up completely helpless. It was payback time.

Chapter 2: The Awakening

Jeff's consciousness returned slowly, like swimming up from deep water. First came the taste—cotton dry mouth and something metallic. Then the smell of hay and old wood. His head pounded from the drugged drink as awareness crept back.

Something was wrong. He tried to move his arms but they wouldn't respond. Panic fluttered in his chest as he tested his bonds. His wrists were crossed and bound tight behind his back, rope cutting into his skin. Thick coils wrapped around his chest and upper arms, pinning his elbows close to his sides. His legs were bound at the ankles and knees.

"What the hell—" he started, but his voice came out as a croak. A dirty bandana had been tied between his teeth, the knot pulled tight behind his head.

"Look who's awake," Marcus sneered, stepping into view. "Welcome to your new position, boss."

Chapter 3: The Games Begin

"Remember how you used to make us beg for water breaks?" Tom asked, circling Jeff like a predator. "Let's play some games of our own."

Tom grabbed the rope around Jeff's biceps and yanked upward, forcing Jeff's shoulders into an agonizing arch. The hemp bit deep into his arms as Tom pulled tighter.

"Every time you struggle, we make it worse," Marcus explained, adding another wrap of rope around Jeff's already burning biceps. "Every time you try to give us orders through that gag, we add more."

Jeff's eyes blazed with fury. He thrashed against his bonds, muscles straining. The men immediately tightened the arm ropes, forcing his elbows closer together behind his back. His shoulders screamed in protest as the unnatural position sent fire down his spine.

"That's one," Marcus laughed, cranking the bicep ropes another notch tighter. Jeff's arms were turning purple from the constriction.

Chapter 4: Childhood Memories

As panic set in, Jeff's mind flashed to childhood games with his brothers. Hogtie escape had been his specialty—he always found a way out. But this was different. These knots were vicious, designed by men who knew how to secure bucking horses and angry bulls. His usual tricks were useless.

The rope around his biceps cut deeper with each breath, his circulation nearly cut off. This wasn't a game anymore.

Chapter 5: The Stripping

"Still making threats?" Carlos asked, watching Jeff's muffled protests through the gag. "Let's see how tough you are when we really get started."

They yanked off his boots, one by one, then peeled away his sweaty socks. Jeff tried to kick but the ankle ropes held firm. Next came his jeans, the men working together to strip them down his legs despite his bound state.

Now clad only in his boxer shorts, Jeff felt truly vulnerable for the first time. The cool barn air raised goosebumps on his exposed skin as they forced him onto his stomach.

"Time for a real hogtie," Tom grinned, pulling Jeff's bound ankles up toward his wrists. New rope connected his feet to his arms, bending him backward in a brutal arch. Every muscle in his back and shoulders screamed in protest as they cranked the connecting rope tighter, lifting his chest and thighs off the ground.

Chapter 6: Strung Up

The pulley system creaked as they attached the rope to the hogtie connection between Jeff's wrists and ankles. Instead of hanging by his feet, his entire body weight now rested on that single connecting rope, creating unbearable tension.

As they hoisted him up, the hogtie rope bore all his weight, pulling his ankles and wrists toward each other with crushing force. His back arched impossibly, every vertebra straining. The position was far worse than hanging upside down—his body formed a suspended bow with no relief.

Clad only in his boxer shorts, Jeff swayed helplessly in the air. Sweat dripped from his forehead, forming a small puddle in the dirt below. He watched each drop fall, mesmerized by the only thing he could still control—where he looked.

Chapter 7: The Beating

The first blow caught him across the ribs. Then another. And another. Jeff's world became a kaleidoscope of pain as fists and boots found their mark. Through it all, he remained suspended, helpless, watching his own sweat and blood spray with each impact.

When they finally stopped, his vision blurred. The barn fell silent except for his ragged breathing through the gag.

Chapter 8: The Long Night

Darkness crept into the abandoned barn. The hogtie rope bore his full weight, creating constant agony as it pulled his limbs in opposite directions. Animal sounds echoed in the night. Coyotes, maybe worse. In his delirium, Jeff imagined claws tearing at his helpless, nearly naked body. He was completely exposed, unable to defend himself from whatever might wander into the barn.

Chapter 9: Breaking Point

Hours passed in suspended agony. Jeff felt his biceps beginning to strain against his shoulders, the unnatural position and his body weight creating pressure he'd never experienced. Terror crept through his pain-fogged mind as he realized what was happening.

His shoulders were going to pop.

The thought sent panic through him. He'd dislocated his shoulder once falling off a horse—the memory of that sickening sensation made him struggle frantically against the ropes. But struggling only made it worse, pulling his arms at an even more impossible angle.

The pressure built steadily. He could feel his shoulder joints stretching, ligaments screaming. The terror was worse than the pain—knowing what was coming and being powerless to stop it.

Then it happened. The first shoulder popped with a wet, grinding sound that echoed through the barn. Jeff's scream was muffled by the gag, but the agony was pure and complete. His left arm hung useless, the joint completely dislocated.

Within minutes, the second shoulder followed with another sickening pop. Both arms now hung dead in their rope prison, no longer part of his body in any meaningful way.

By dawn, Jeff was sobbing. The tough foreman was gone, replaced by a broken boy who just wanted his brothers to find him. Every childhood memory of escape games mocked him. This was torture, pure and simple. There was no safe word, no older brother to untie him when the game went too far.

Chapter 10: Rescue

The sound of truck engines cut through the morning air. Jeff's heart leaped—his father's voice, calling his name.

"Jeff! Jeffrey!" The voice was getting closer.

Heavy boots pounded across the barn floor. The door creaked open, flooding the space with morning light.

"Jesus Christ," his father breathed, seeing his son's broken form suspended in just his underwear. "Get him down! NOW!"

"Oh God, Jeff," his older brother Mike whispered, rushing to the pulley system. "What did they do to you?"

"Careful, careful," their father warned as they lowered the rope. "His shoulders... look at his shoulders."

Jeff collapsed as soon as his feet touched the ground, unable to support his own weight. His brothers caught him gently, laying him on his side.

"We need to cut these ropes," Mike said, his voice shaking. "But his arms... Dad, I think his shoulders are dislocated."

"Just cut him free, son. We'll deal with the rest at the hospital."

The knife worked through rope after rope. Each binding that fell away revealed the extent of the damage—deep rope burns, purple bruises, swollen joints.

"Who did this?" his father asked softly, cradling Jeff's head. "Who did this to you, son?"

Jeff couldn't answer through his tears. He was completely, utterly broken, sobbing like the child he felt like inside.

"It's okay," Mike whispered, working on the last of the ankle ropes. "You're safe now. We've got you."

"Get the truck closer," their father ordered. "We need to get him to Doc Henderson now."

As they carefully lifted him, Jeff managed one word through his sobs: "Hurts."

"I know, son. I know. But you're safe now."

Chapter 11: Redneck Justice

Within hours, Jeff's father and brothers had tracked down the three ranch hands. No words were exchanged—just swift, brutal justice. The men were beaten unconscious and dragged to the same barn.

When they awoke, they found themselves in Jeff's position. Arms wrenched behind them, elbows nearly touching, hoisted by hogtie ropes that bore their full weight. Blindfolded with duct tape over their mouths, they could only grunt and struggle as the ropes bit deep into their flesh.

Chapter 12: White Claw Justice

Jeff's boots echoed hollow against the barn floor as he approached the three figures swaying in the dim light. Their arms were wrenched behind them at impossible angles, elbows nearly touching, biceps screaming against the manila rope that bit deep into their flesh. The same knots. The same merciless positioning that had popped his shoulders and left him sobbing.

He cracked open the White Claw—the same brand that had been his downfall—and watched the foam bubble over his fingers. The ranch hands' muffled protests died behind the duct tape as they heard the familiar sound.

"Remember this?" Jeff whispered, tilting the can above the first man's chest. The cold liquid splashed across rope-burned skin, mixing with sweat and blood. The bound figure jerked violently, setting off a chain reaction as all three bodies spun and collided in their suspended hell.

Jeff moved methodically to each one, pouring the alcohol over their contorted forms, watching it drip into the same dirt that had caught his own sweat and blood. Their blindfolds were soaked now, clinging to their faces like second skin.

He dropped the empty can and walked toward the barn door, pausing only to look back at the three figures swaying helplessly in the shadows. Their muffled cries followed him into the morning sun, but Jeff kept walking.

The barn door creaked shut behind him with a final, echoing thud.