Thursday, May 1, 2025

The Allstar AI assisted


 The weight room door clicked shut behind Jake as he stepped into the empty parking lot. Practice had run late, and now darkness blanketed the school grounds. His muscles ached pleasantly from the extra reps he'd put in—tomorrow's championship game demanded nothing less.

The van appeared from nowhere.

Two figures in black masks erupted from the sliding door, moving with practiced efficiency. Jake's quarterback reflexes kicked in, but his gym bag slowed him just enough. A thick arm clamped around his throat while another pinned his biceps.

"Don't fight," a voice growled in his ear. "We just need you to miss one game."

Jake thrashed against their grip, his cleats scraping uselessly against the asphalt as they dragged him toward the van's open maw. His strength—the same power that could launch a perfect spiral fifty yards downfield—meant nothing against the surprise and their numbers.

"Vegas has the spread at fourteen points," another voice said, shoving him face-down onto the van floor. "Nothing personal, Twenty-Two."

A knee pressed into his back while rough hemp rope wrapped around his elbows, forcing them together behind his back. The rope bit deeply as his forearms were bound tightly against each other, the positioning severely restricting any movement. Each loop destroyed his chances of playing tomorrow. Each twist confirmed what Jake already knew—this was about money, gambling, the point spread. His absence from the game would be worth thousands to someone.

"Can't have you yelling for help," the first voice muttered.

Before Jake could protest, a cloth was forced between his teeth. More rope wrapped around his head, securing the gag tightly in place. His attempts to speak reduced to muffled, useless sounds.

The blindfold came next, plunging him into darkness as the van door slammed shut.

The engine rumbled to life, and Jake felt the van lurch forward. Despite the blindfold, he tried to track their movements—left out of the school parking lot, right at what must be Main Street, then the smooth acceleration of a highway on-ramp. His mind raced faster than the vehicle carrying him away from everything that mattered.

Time stretched impossibly in the darkness behind his blindfold. The hemp rope bit into his elbows with every bump in the road, a constant reminder of his powerlessness. He flexed against his restraints experimentally, feeling the fibers hold firm against even his conditioned strength. The gag muffled his frustrated groan.

His captors spoke little during the drive, only occasional muttered directions or checking something on their phones. Once, he heard one of them say, "Line's already moving since he didn't show for the team dinner."

Jake tried to calculate the distance they might cover in what felt like an hour's drive. Sixty miles could put him in three different states, dozens of small towns, or deep into the countryside where no one would hear him even if he could make noise. The van's constant motion made it impossible to tell if they were traveling in circles or straight away from everything familiar.

The drone of tires against asphalt eventually changed to the crunch of gravel. The van slowed, bouncing over what must be a rural road or driveway. After a final turn, they stopped.

"End of the line, quarterback," one of the voices announced. "Your five-star accommodation awaits."

The blindfold stayed in place as they hauled Jake from the van. His bare feet scraped against gravel, then rough wooden planks—a porch or deck—before the surface changed to smooth concrete. The musty smell of disuse filled his nostrils as they moved deeper into what must be an abandoned building.

"Sit," commanded a voice, shoving him backward.

Jake collapsed onto a hard wooden chair, his bound elbows striking painfully against its back. Hands gripped his shoulders, holding him firmly in place while more rope circled his chest, securing him to the chair. The hemp fibers tightened across his torso, pinning him from shoulders to waist.

One of his captors dropped to the floor. Jake flinched as rough hands grabbed his ankles, pulling them together and binding them tightly. Instead of securing his feet to the chair, his captor pushed them under the seat, positioning them in the empty space beneath.

"This'll keep you from getting any bright ideas," the voice said.

Jake felt hemp rope being threaded from his bound ankles, running up behind the chair and ultimately looping around his neck. His captor pulled it just tight enough to create tension—not choking him, but delivering a clear message: any attempt to pull his feet out from under the chair would strangle him with his own movements.

"Simple," the voice explained with cold efficiency. "Try to pull your feet out, and you choke yourself. Struggle too much, same result." A hand patted Jake's shoulder mockingly. "Football genius like you should be able to figure that out."

"One more thing," another voice added. "Can't have you listening for rescue."

Heavy headphones slid over Jake's ears, immediately muffling the world around him. A switch clicked, and white noise filled his hearing, blocking out even the faintest sounds from the building or his captors. The isolation was now complete—blindfolded, gagged, and deaf to the world.

Footsteps he could no longer hear retreated across the concrete floor. A door he imagined must have creaked open then slammed shut. He felt the vibration through the floor but heard nothing beyond the persistent static in his ears.

He was alone. Bound to a chair with his feet positioned precariously beneath it, connected by rope to his neck. Every sense except touch and smell had been taken from him. Every instinct screamed to fight the restraints, but the slight pressure against his throat warned that struggling might be exactly what would kill him.Jake waited until the vibrations in the floor had long faded, confirming his captors' departure. Despite the overwhelming sensory isolation, his mind remained sharp, calculating. He tensed his shoulders experimentally, testing the rope across his chest. The fibers held firm, biting into his skin through his practice jersey.

His breathing quickened behind the gag. The championship game was less than eighteen hours away. His team—his responsibility—would be waiting for him. He had to move.

Jake flexed his arms against the elbow bindings, immediately feeling the hemp rope's unyielding grip. Unlike wrist restraints, binding the elbows together created a position nearly impossible to leverage against. His quarterback's shoulders—the same ones that could launch a ball with pinpoint accuracy—were rendered useless, pulled back and immobilized.

Frustration built inside him. The white noise in the headphones seemed to amplify his racing heartbeat. Sweat began to form despite the cool air of the abandoned building. He bounced his weight slightly in the chair, feeling for any weakness in its construction. The wooden frame creaked but held solid.

His next thought came automatically—his legs. Before his mind could process the danger, Jake instinctively pushed forward with his bound ankles.

The rope around his neck immediately tightened.

Panic exploded through him as his airway constricted. He froze instantly, forcing his legs back to their original position. The pressure eased, but left him gasping through his nose, the cloth gag suddenly feeling twice its size in his mouth.

A wave of claustrophobia threatened to overwhelm him. The darkness of the blindfold, the constant white noise, the rope at his throat—his mind spun with growing terror. He was Jake Mitchell, Hudson High's star quarterback, about to lead his team to the state championship. Now he was fighting not for victory but for breath.

Focus. Coach Harmon's voice echoed in his thoughts. When you're blitzed, don't panic. Assess. Adapt.

Jake forced his breathing to slow. In through the nose, measured exhales against the gag. He needed to analyze his situation without emotion—like reading a defense. The rope connecting his ankles to his neck meant conventional struggling was impossible. His elbows bound together eliminated most upper body leverage. The chair seemed solid.

But his captors had made one critical error—overconfidence.

He tested the rope at his neck again, this time with microscopic movements. The tension system required his feet to move forward to create dangerous pressure. What if movement came from another direction?

Jake began to work his shoulders in tiny circles, feeling the coarse hemp fibers of the chest bindings. If he could create even the slightest slack there, he might gain room to maneuver. The sweat now coating his body might eventually help the rope slide, given enough time and persistent movement.

His football training had taught him that victory often came down to millimeters of advantage. Right now, he'd take any edge he could find.

The white noise continued its assault on his hearing as he worked, his body tensing and releasing in patterns too subtle for anyone watching to notice. Every few minutes, he'd rest, conserving energy while planning his next attempt.

They'd taken his senses, his movement, even his voice. But they hadn't counted on his determination. The championship game waited. His team needed him. Nothing—not ropes, not chairs, not the threat of strangulation—would keep him from that field.

Jake Mitchell settled into the long fight ahead, one careful movement at a time.The vibration came first—a low tremor through the concrete floor that Jake felt in his bare feet. Then a rush of cooler air as what must have been the door opened. His captors had returned.

Jake immediately stilled his movements, hoping they wouldn't notice the minimal progress he'd made. Sweat now soaked his jersey, evidence of his efforts. The white noise in his headphones continued, but he sensed movement around him—shadows shifting in the darkness of his mind.

Without warning, the headphones were yanked from his ears. Sound rushed back—footsteps, breathing, the creak of floorboards.

"Well, well," a voice said, closer than Jake expected. "Look who's been busy."

A hand grabbed his hair, pulling his head back sharply. The rope around his neck tightened with the movement, forcing a choked sound past his gag.

"Did you think we wouldn't check on our investment?" The voice belonged to the taller captor, the one who'd bound his elbows. "Fourteen points. That's the spread. Do you have any idea how much money is riding on you sitting out tomorrow's game?"

Something cold pressed against Jake's temple. Metal. A gun barrel.

"This was supposed to be simple," another voice said. "Just keep you comfortable until after kickoff tomorrow. No harm done. But now I'm thinking you need to understand the seriousness of your situation."

The pressure of the gun disappeared, but before Jake could feel relief, a fist drove into his stomach. The impact forced air from his lungs, but the gag blocked his gasping attempt to recover. He doubled over as far as the chest bindings would allow, fighting for breath through his nose.

"That's for trying to escape," the first voice said flatly. "Next time, we break something. Nothing that won't heal eventually, but enough to end your season either way."

Rough hands seized his bound ankles, pulling them further under the chair. The rope at his neck tightened alarmingly.

"Maybe we need to make this more persuasive," the second voice suggested. Jake felt additional rope being wrapped around his ankles, then threaded under the chair and up to his neck restraint, creating a second connection. The captor pulled it tight, leaving even less room for movement before securing it. "There. Now even breathing too deep might be uncomfortable."

The first captor laughed, the sound echoing in the empty space. "Smart. Very smart." A hand patted Jake's cheek mockingly. "Lesson time, quarterback. In football, you get penalties for breaking rules. In our game, penalties are a bit more permanent."

Something cold splashed across Jake's face—water, shocking him with its sudden chill. It soaked through his blindfold, ran down his neck, and drenched the front of his jersey.

"That's to wash off all that effort you wasted," the voice said. "Hemp rope gets tighter when wet. Enjoy that little physics lesson."

The headphones returned, plunging Jake back into the audio void. As the white noise resumed, he felt the ropes indeed beginning to shrink, tightening around his chest, elbows, and most alarmingly, his neck. The microscopic progress he'd made over hours of careful work vanished instantly as the fibers contracted.

The vibrations of departing footsteps faded again, leaving Jake alone with a new understanding of his predicament. These weren't amateurs. They had thought of everything, anticipated his resistance.

Worse, they would be back. And next time, the punishment might be far more severe than a punch and wet ropes.

Jake's determination wavered for the first time. The championship game suddenly seemed very far away."Time for your close-up, superstar."

The headphones were yanked off Jake's ears again. He heard movement, the scrape of what might be a tripod, then the distinctive click and beep of electronics being set up.

"Perfect lighting for our production," one captor said, voice tinged with dark amusement. "Dad needs to see exactly what he's paying for."

Jake's head snapped up at the mention of his father. The blindfold remained in place, but he strained against it instinctively, as if he could somehow see through the fabric.

"Camera's good to go," the second voice reported. "Stream's encrypted, untraceable."

Cold fingers gripped Jake's chin, forcing his head up and forward. "Hold him like that," the first voice commanded. "Make sure the bindings are visible."

The grip on Jake's chin tightened painfully as something beeped nearby. "We're live in three, two, one..."

"Mr. Mitchell," the first captor began, his voice suddenly professional, almost businesslike. "As you can see, we have Jake. He's physically unharmed, but as you can also see, his current accommodations are... restrictive."

Jake tried to jerk his head away, but the grip only tightened.

"By now you've probably guessed this isn't just about tomorrow's game, though Jake will certainly be missing it." The captor chuckled. "The gambling angle was real, but there's more money in direct transactions, wouldn't you agree?"

Jake heard a rustling of paper.

"Five hundred thousand dollars, Mr. Mitchell. That's our price. I know the Mitchell family foundation can manage that without difficulty. You have twelve hours—that's 6 AM tomorrow. We'll send transfer instructions separately."

The second captor spoke up. "To demonstrate our seriousness..."

Without warning, Jake felt the rope connecting his ankles to his neck pull taut. The sudden pressure against his throat made him choke against the gag, his oxygen immediately restricted. He tried to remain still, but panic took over as his lungs burned for air.

"As you can see," the first voice continued calmly over Jake's muffled sounds of distress, "your son's situation is precarious. The more he struggles, the worse it gets. A rather elegant arrangement, don't you think?"

After several agonizing seconds, the rope slackened. Jake gasped through his nose, drawing in precious oxygen.

"That wasn't even us pulling the rope, Mr. Mitchell. That's just what happens when Jake moves the wrong way. Imagine what we might do if you don't comply."

The grip on Jake's chin released, allowing his head to drop forward as he continued to recover.

"Twelve hours. Five hundred thousand. No police. We're monitoring scanner traffic and have people watching your house. We'll know."

The second captor's voice moved closer to what Jake now realized was a camera. "One more thing. The game. Hudson needs to lose by at least fourteen points or the deal's off. Jake permanently benched, if you catch my meaning. We've got too much riding on that spread."

"The clock's ticking, Mr. Mitchell," the first voice concluded. "Your move."

A beep indicated the end of the transmission. Jake heard equipment being moved, then felt the headphones being replaced over his ears.

"Your dad looked properly terrified," one of the captors said just before the white noise resumed. "Let's hope he's as smart as you are talented."

The room fell silent again to Jake's perception as the white noise drowned out all other sounds. But now a new fear gnawed at him. His father was wealthy, but not that wealthy. The foundation money wasn't liquid—it was tied up in investments, endowments, scholarships. And the gambling demands meant his father faced an impossible choice: pay a ransom that might not even save his son if Hudson won the game or won by less than fourteen points.

For the first time, Jake realized this might not end with him simply missing a game. These men had shown their faces to a camera. They had escalated to kidnapping and extortion. The stakes had become life and death.After the camera was turned off, Jake sensed one of the captors still standing directly in front of him.

"You know what the problem is with you high school stars?" The voice was calm, conversational, but with an undercurrent of something dangerous. "You think you're untouchable."

Without warning, an open palm struck Jake's face hard enough to snap his head sideways. The sudden movement pulled against the rope at his neck, triggering a choking sensation that amplified the pain.

"All those college scouts watching." Another slap from the opposite direction, equally shocking. "All those cheerleaders screaming your name." A third blow, harder than the others.

Jake's ears rang from the impacts. He tried to prepare for the next one, but each came from a different angle, impossible to anticipate through the blindfold.

"Do you have any idea," the voice continued, punctuating each few words with another stinging slap, "how many people lose everything because of entitled brats like you? How many families go hungry because some desperate father bet his paycheck on a high school game?"

The gag muffled Jake's involuntary sounds as the assault continued, methodical rather than frenzied. These weren't the wild punches of someone losing control but the calculated actions of someone making a point.

"Your father needs to understand exactly who he's dealing with." One final, stunning blow snapped Jake's head back. "And you need to learn that there's always someone bigger, someone willing to do whatever it takes."

Jake tasted blood through the cloth in his mouth. His face burned, and he could feel the warmth of swelling beginning around his left eye.

"Send the photos to his father," the voice instructed the other captor. "Show him we're not playing around."

Jake heard the click of a phone camera capturing multiple images of his now-marked face. His stomach turned at the thought of his father seeing him like this—helpless, beaten, unable to even protect himself from open-handed slaps.

"Let him think about what might happen next if he doesn't pay up," the voice said, moving away at last. "Sometimes imagination is more persuasive than anything we could actually do."

The headphones returned, cutting off the world once more, leaving Jake alone with the throbbing pain across his face and the metallic taste of blood seeping through his gag. The physical discomfort was nothing compared to the humiliation and helplessness that washed over him. For a young man accustomed to commanding respect on the field, to leading others through strength and ability, this deliberate degradation cut deeper than any physical blow could.

But beneath the shame, something hardened in Jake's core. A cold fury began to build. These men had crossed a line. For the first time since his abduction, Jake wasn't thinking about escape to make the game. He was thinking about survival—and eventually, justice.

The vibrations through the floor came again. Different this time—hurried, uneven. The headphones were ripped from Jake's ears, but no taunting voice followed. Instead, rushed whispers and the sound of equipment being hastily packed.

"Wire transfer confirmed." The first captor sounded tense. "Half a million. Clean."

"What about the game?" The second voice was closer to Jake, almost directly behind him.

"Kickoff's in three hours. Nothing we can do about it now." A pause. "Besides, we got what we really came for."

Jake felt hands at his blindfold. For a moment, hope surged through him—were they releasing him? The fabric loosened, then dropped away. Jake blinked against the sudden assault of pale morning light filtering through dirty windows. The abandoned building came into focus—an old warehouse or factory space, concrete floors, broken machinery pushed against graffiti-covered walls.

His captors stood before him, masks still in place but bags slung over their shoulders. They were leaving.

"What about him?" The shorter one gestured toward Jake.

The taller captor shrugged. "Someone will find him. Eventually." He checked his watch. "We need to be across state lines before noon."

Jake made urgent sounds behind his gag, trying desperately to communicate. The championship game—his team—they needed him. His father had paid the ransom. Didn't that mean they'd release him?

"Sorry, quarterback." The taller captor moved toward the exit. "Business decision. Too risky to stick around."

The second captor hesitated, then stepped forward. He reached toward Jake's bindings, and for a brief, hopeful moment, Jake thought he might be freed.

Instead, the man merely checked that the ropes remained secure. "Someone will find you. Probably." He turned away. "Or not."

Jake thrashed against his restraints, the movement causing the neck rope to tighten dangerously. He froze immediately, gasping for breath through his nose. By the time he recovered, the heavy metal door was slamming shut. The sound of a vehicle starting outside faded rapidly into the distance.

They were gone. His father had paid the ransom, and they had simply left him.

The realization crashed over Jake like a defensive lineman at full speed. He was alone, still bound to the chair, the rope connecting his feet to his neck still a lethal trap. No one knew where he was. The championship game would begin soon, without him, his team wondering where their quarterback had disappeared to.

For the first time since his abduction, Jake felt hot tears well up and spill over. They traced paths down his bruised cheeks, stinging the split at the corner of his mouth. The emotions he'd suppressed for hours—fear, humiliation, anger—merged into a wave of despair that broke through his carefully maintained composure.

A sob shook his body, causing the rope to tighten again. The physical pain only added to his emotional breakdown. Everything he'd endured, every moment of resistance and hope, had led to this—abandoned in an empty building, bound to a chair with a rope around his neck, the game he'd worked toward all season about to be played without him.

His shoulders heaved with silent weeping, each careful breath through his nose a reminder of his continued captivity. The sunlight moved slowly across the concrete floor as morning advanced, marking the passing of precious time. His team would be gathering now, wondering where he was. Coach Harmon would be calling plays for his backup quarterback.

Jake closed his eyes, unable to bear the reality before him. The salt of his tears had soaked into the gag, the taste bitter and fitting. His father had paid a fortune to save him, and still, he sat here, broken and alone.

The championship trophy that should have been his would go to someone else. And Jake Mitchell—the star quarterback with the golden arm and limitless potential—might never be found at all.A sound penetrated Jake's haze of dehydration and exhaustion—metal scraping against metal. His head hung forward, chin resting against his chest. How many hours had passed? Days? The championship game had come and gone. His throat burned with thirst, his stomach cramped with hunger.

The sound came again. Voices followed, distant but professional.

"Breach team in position. Stand by."

Jake tried to lift his head but lacked the strength. The sounds grew louder—boots on concrete, tactical communication.

"FBI! Clear! Room one, clear!"

The voices moved closer, echoing through the empty building.

"Room two, clear! Moving to final sector!"

A beam of light swept across Jake's face. For a moment, silence.

"Subject located! Medical, we need you now!"

Footsteps rushed toward him. A figure in tactical gear knelt before him, gentle hands lifting his chin.

"Jake Mitchell? I'm Special Agent Ramirez with the FBI. You're safe now."

More agents flooded the room, securing the perimeter. A woman in a different uniform approached, medical kit in hand.

"Patient appears severely dehydrated," she reported clinically, checking his vital signs. "But stable."

The restraints came off methodically—first the headphones, then the blindfold. The bright tactical lights blinded Jake momentarily. He blinked, tears forming from both emotion and the sudden illumination.

"G-game?" he rasped through parched lips as they removed the gag.

"Hudson lost by three," Agent Ramirez said, cutting through the chest bindings. "Your backup played his heart out."

A bottle of water appeared at Jake's lips, held by the medic who allowed him only small sips. "Easy," she cautioned. "Too much at once will make you sick."

"Two days," another agent said, carefully freeing Jake's elbows. "You've been missing for forty-eight hours."

Two days. The game truly was over. His team had played without him, fought without him. Jake closed his eyes as the weight of lost time pressed down on him.

"Your father received the coordinates twelve hours ago," Agent Ramirez explained, working on the ankle bindings. "But the message said any police involvement would mean your death. He waited almost a full day before contacting us."

Jake nodded weakly, understanding his father's impossible choice.

"We've been tracking the money," another agent called from across the room, examining the building's layout. "Three states already. Sophisticated operation."

As the last rope fell away, Jake slumped forward, caught by waiting arms. His muscles screamed in protest as they moved him from the chair to a portable stretcher. Two days in one position had left him barely able to move.

"Multiple ligature marks, possible nerve damage," the medic reported. "Dehydration, malnutrition, psychological trauma. Priority transport."

Jake felt himself being lifted, carried toward the exit. The cool night air hit his face—his first breath of freedom. Stars dotted the sky above, indifferent to the human drama below.

"Did..." He struggled to form words, his mouth cotton-dry despite the water. "Did they catch them?"

Agent Ramirez walked alongside the stretcher. "Not yet. But we will. The ransom transfer left electronic fingerprints. Facial recognition from your father's video call gave us two IDs. It's just a matter of time."

The flashing lights of emergency vehicles painted the abandoned industrial complex in surreal colors. News vans had already gathered at the perimeter, held back by local police.

"Your family's at the hospital," Ramirez continued. "Your coach too. The entire team wanted to come, but..." He gestured at the circus of activity around them.

As they loaded him into the ambulance, Jake caught a glimpse of a figure breaking through the police line—a reporter with a camera.

"Jake! Jake Mitchell! Can you tell us what happened?"

The ambulance doors closed, shutting out the chaos. The medic continued working, inserting an IV for fluids. "You're going to be okay," she assured him. "The physical injuries will heal."

Jake nodded, understanding her implicit message. The physical wounds would heal faster than the others. As the ambulance pulled away, sirens silent out of consideration for his headache, Jake closed his eyes.

The championship game had been lost. Two days of his life had vanished. But he had survived. Whatever came next—recovery, investigation, eventual return to normalcy—would be on his terms, not theirs.

For now, that small victory would have to be enough.

AI Inspired The carjacking of Jake







 "Hold still, cowboy," the masked man said, voice unnervingly calm. "This'll go easier if you don't fight."

Jake bucked against the hands restraining him, his muscles straining. A boot pressed into his chest, forcing the air from his lungs.

"I said don't fight."

The rope was rough against his skin as they bound his wrists behind his back, the fibers scraping with each movement. The man worked methodically, wrapping and knotting with practiced precision. Each loop tightened incrementally until Jake's shoulders strained backward.

They cinched rope around his chest next, passing it above and below his pectorals, binding his arms flush against his back. With each pass of the rope, Jake felt his options diminishing, his freedom constricting with the hemp.

"Nice and tight," the man muttered, testing the bonds with a rough tug that made Jake wince. "This one knows his knots, don't you, rich boy? Bet daddy taught you all about ranching."

Jake remained silent, refusing to give them the satisfaction.

"Not talking? That's fine." The man produced a cloth gag. "You won't need to say much anyway. Just enough to convince daddy you're worth a million dollars."Day bled into night in the stifling barn. Jake's muscles screamed from hours of immobility, the hemp ropes leaving angry red welts wherever they crossed his skin. He'd spent the afternoon testing his bonds during the brief periods when they left him alone, searching for weakness in the knots, but found none.

The barn door creaked open. Three figures entered—the leader carrying a bucket that sloshed with water.

"Your father's taking his sweet time," the leader said, setting down the bucket. "Maybe he needs motivation."

Jake's stomach tightened as the man pulled something from his jacket pocket—long, pale strips that Jake recognized immediately. Rawhide. His father had used it on the ranch for years.

The leader dipped the first strip into the bucket, soaking it thoroughly. "Special treatment for you, cowboy. Know what happens to rawhide when it dries?"

Jake knew. He'd seen it bind fence posts tighter than any nail could hold, seen it shrink around handles until it became one with the wood. His pulse quickened.

"I can see you do," the man said, noting Jake's expression. "Smart boy."

They removed the hemp around his chest first, replacing it with the wet, pliable rawhide, winding it in the same pattern but looser—deceptively comfortable against his skin. Jake couldn't stop the cold sweat breaking across his forehead as they worked, the childhood memory surging unbidden: his father's hands working similar rawhide, his small body trembling as punishment was prepared.

"This'll take a while to work," the leader explained, almost conversational. "But when it does..." He left the sentence unfinished, patting Jake's cheek. "Maybe we'll make a video for daddy while you experience it."Three hours had passed since they'd applied the rawhide. The gradual tightening had begun as barely perceptible, but now each shallow breath Jake took was a struggle against the steadily contracting bonds. His ribs ached with every inhale.

The two guards had stepped outside, voices carrying faintly through the barn walls. This was his chance—perhaps his only one.

Jake rolled onto his side, ignoring the pain as he worked his bound hands beneath him. Sweat poured down his face as he contorted, trying to bring his hands below his buttocks and past his legs. The rawhide around his chest constricted further with each movement, punishing his efforts.

His shoulders screamed in protest. The knots that had seemed potentially workable when made of hemp were now impossibly tight in the drying rawhide. Still, he persisted, twisting his wrists against the binding until he felt warm wetness—blood from raw skin.

A sudden spasm seized his back muscles. Jake bit down hard on the gag to stifle his groan. The rawhide squeezed tighter across his chest, seemingly responding to his resistance.

Footsteps approached outside. Jake froze, then quickly rolled back to his original position, heart pounding against the constricting bands.

The door swung open. The leader paused, studying Jake's face.

"Busy while we were gone?" he asked, noting the fresh sweat and the blood now staining the rawhide at Jake's wrists. "That was stupid."

He knelt beside Jake, checking the bonds, then smiled coldly. "Fighting just makes it worse. Rawhide doesn't forgive struggle." He adjusted the restraints, pulling them fractionally tighter. "Neither do I."Night had fallen completely now. The rawhide had contracted to a crushing pressure, each breath reduced to shallow sips of air. Through the fog of discomfort, a memory surfaced—vivid and unwanted.

He was twelve again, bound to the post in his father's barn. "To teach you discipline," his father had said after catching him taking the truck without permission. The rawhide had been wet then too, his father knowing exactly how the slow tightening would amplify the lesson.

Jake had screamed at first, threatened, begged. None of it mattered. The rawhide continued its inexorable constriction.

Eventually, he'd stopped fighting. Not from surrender, but from the realization that struggle only hastened the tightening. He'd found a place inside himself—quiet, removed from the pain—where he could wait. Where patience became not just a virtue but survival.

Now, eight years later, Jake felt cold sweat break across his forehead as the parallel struck him. His captors expected desperation, anticipated his struggle. They'd return to find him exhausted, defeated by his own resistance.

Instead, he forced his breathing to slow, ignored the burning across his ribs, and found that quiet place again. His body quieted. His mind cleared.

They had tied him with expert precision, professional in their cruelty. But they couldn't know they were using the exact tools his father had employed to inadvertently teach him how to endure this very torture.

The rawhide would continue to contract for hours yet, but Jake knew something his captors didn't: he had endured this before. He would outlast their patience, conserve his strength, and wait for the single opportunity that would inevitably come.

His father's cruelest lesson had become his greatest asset.RanThe barn door swung open, flooding the dusty space with harsh morning light. Jake squinted against the sudden brightness, his body stiff from the night spent in rawhide's unforgiving embrace.

"Congratulations, cowboy. Daddy came through," the leader announced, waving a phone. "Wire transfer confirmed twenty minutes ago."

Jake's surge of relief was immediately tempered by the look in the man's eyes—cold calculation rather than the satisfaction of concluded business.

"Unfortunately, there's a change of plans."

Two men hauled Jake to his stomach. The movement sent fresh waves of pain across his raw skin where the rawhide had dug in overnight. They didn't remove his bindings as he'd expected; instead, they added more.

"Insurance policy," the leader explained as they bent Jake's legs backward. "Nothing personal."

They used fresh rope to secure his ankles, then connected them to his wrist bindings in a tight hogtie that forced his back into an agonizing arch. The position made breathing even more difficult, each shallow gasp requiring conscious effort.

"Can't have you following us too quickly."

They wrapped a blindfold around his eyes next. Darkness. Disorientation. The sudden loss of vision heightened his other senses—the scrape of boots on wood, the metallic click of what sounded like a truck tailgate dropping.

Hands gripped him roughly, lifting. Jake grunted against the gag as they tossed him onto what felt like a metal truck bed. The engine rumbled to life beneath him.

The ride was torturous. Every bump in the road slammed his bound body against hard metal. Without hands to brace himself, each impact jarred through bone and muscle. Time stretched, direction lost in the darkness behind his blindfold. Ten minutes? An hour? The pain made time meaningless.

Eventually, the truck slowed, then stopped. The tailgate dropped, and hands dragged him out. The ground beneath him changed from metal to soft earth.

"Walk's about two miles thataway," one of the men said, voice deliberately misleading. "Someone should find you. Eventually."

Laughter. The slam of truck doors. Engine revving.

Then silence.

Jake lay on what felt like forest floor, pine needles and twigs pressing into his cheek. The air was cooler here, carrying the scent of resin and earth. Somewhere distant, a bird called.

Wilderness.

He worked his jaw against the gag, testing it. The fabric had grown loose with his dried saliva. If he could just—

A slight give. Progress.

Jake focused on his breathing, keeping it steady. The patience he'd cultivated would serve him still. Slowly, methodically, he began working against the dampened gag.

Night would come again. Predators would emerge. But he'd survived worse than this forest.

One knot at a time.The gag came free first, after what felt like hours of working his jaw. Jake spat it out, gulping sweet, unrestricted air. The blindfold was next—he rubbed his face against the forest floor until it slipped enough for him to see the dappled sunlight through the trees.

Orienting himself was impossible. The kidnappers had driven in circles, deliberately confusing any sense of direction. The sun was high—midday, then. At least he had hours before darkness fell.

The hogtie position had grown excruciating, muscles screaming from being held in the unnatural arch. But pain was familiar now, almost an ally in keeping his mind sharp.

Jake cataloged his assets: patience, knowledge of rope, and the forest itself. His father's harsh tutelage had taught him to find resources in unlikely places.

A sharp-edged rock caught his eye, perhaps fifteen feet away. If he could reach it...

Jake began the painstaking process of inching across the forest floor, using his chin and shoulders to drag his bound body forward. The movement caused the rawhide to dig deeper, but he kept his breathing controlled, his mind focused on the task rather than the pain.

Six inches. A foot. Another.

A branch snagged on the rope between his wrists and ankles, pulling the hogtie tighter. Jake froze, waiting out the wave of agony that followed. When it subsided to a dull throb, he adjusted his position and continued the slow crawl.

The rock grew closer. Three feet now. Two.

Pain was temporary. Freedom was worth it.

His father's voice echoed in his memory: "Struggle smart, not hard." The man's cruelty had been methodical, but so were his lessons.

Jake's fingers finally brushed against the rock's rough edge. Despite everything, he smiled.

The kidnappers had made one critical mistake: they'd left him alone with his greatest strengths—endurance and time.The crack of branches under heavy footsteps jerked Jake from his half-conscious state. He had managed to free one ankle from the hogtie but remained largely immobilized. The rock he'd used to saw at his bonds lay nearby, stained with both rope fibers and his own blood.

Survival instinct kicked in. Jake went still, holding his breath to listen. Not the careful steps of a predator—these were deliberate, human. The kidnappers returning? Or—

"Jake!" The voice broke through the forest's ambient sounds—deep, urgent, familiar. "JAKE!"

Relief flooded through him with such force that for a moment, he couldn't respond. Then, summoning what little strength remained:

"Here!" His voice came out as a rasp, parched from thirst. He tried again, louder. "I'm here!"

The footsteps quickened, crashing through underbrush. Then his father burst into the small clearing, flanked by two men Jake recognized as ranch hands. For a moment, his father stood frozen, taking in the sight of his son bound and bloodied on the forest floor.

"Oh, God." His father's weathered face crumpled as he rushed forward, dropping to his knees beside Jake. "I found you. I found you."

The ranch hands hung back respectfully as his father's trembling hands began working at the rawhide bindings. The material had dried into a second skin, fused in places with dried blood. Every tug sent fresh pain radiating through Jake's body.

"Knife," his father said tersely, extending his hand without looking up. One of the ranch hands placed a hunting knife in his palm. His father worked the blade carefully between Jake's skin and the rawhide, sawing with precision.

"I'm sorry it took so long," his father said, voice uncharacteristically thick. "The transfer had complications. By the time it went through, they'd already moved you."

The rawhide around Jake's chest fell away. He drew his first deep breath in what felt like days, ribs expanding painfully against bruised skin.

"How did you find me?" Jake asked as his father moved to free his wrists.

"Tracker dog. And luck." The last of the bindings fell away. "Can you move?"

Jake tried to straighten his legs, grimacing as blood rushed back into numbed limbs. "Give me a minute."

Instead of waiting, his father did something Jake couldn't remember him doing since early childhood—he gathered his son into his arms. The embrace was gentle, mindful of Jake's injuries, but firm.

"I thought I'd lost you," his father whispered, his voice breaking.

Jake stiffened initially, the physical contact foreign after their years of emotional distance. Then, slowly, he returned the embrace, feeling something shift between them—something that had been bound tight for years, finally beginning to loosen.Two weeks later, the physical evidence of Jake's ordeal had begun to fade. The rope burns had healed into pink lines, the bruises mellowing from violent purple to sickly yellow. The psychological marks ran deeper.

Jake stood in the center of his father's ranch office, watching as the older man looked up from his desk with confusion.

"You want me to what?" his father asked, certain he'd misheard.

"Tie me up," Jake repeated, his voice steady. He placed a coil of rope on the desk between them. "Not like before. Not as punishment. As practice."

His father's eyes darkened with understanding and something else—remorse, perhaps. He pushed back from the desk. "Jake, what I did to you when you were a boy—"

"Saved my life," Jake interrupted. "I'm not saying it was right. It wasn't. But knowing how to be patient in restraints kept me alive out there."

His father studied him for a long moment. "There are other ways to learn patience."

"But this is the skill I need now," Jake insisted. "Those men are still out there. What if they try again? Or what if someone else does?" He pushed the rope closer to his father. "I need to be better at getting free."

Minutes later, they stood in the empty barn—the same space where, years before, punishment had been administered. This time, Jake watched with clear eyes as his father hesitantly wrapped the rope around his wrists.

"Tighter," Jake instructed when his father's bindings proved too loose. "Make it real."

His father complied, though reluctance showed in every movement. When he finished, Jake tested the bonds—firm, professionally tied, but nothing like the cruel efficiency of the kidnappers.

"Now leave," Jake said. "Come back in thirty minutes."

His father paused at the barn door, looking back at his son—no longer the frightened boy he'd once disciplined with such cold detachment, nor the broken young man he'd cradled in the forest. Something new had emerged from those experiences.

When his father returned twenty-eight minutes later, he found the barn empty, the coil of rope neatly arranged on a hay bale. A note beside it read: Two minutes faster than yesterday. Tomorrow, make it harder.

Outside, Jake stood watching the sunset across the ranch, rubbing his wrists where the rope had been. The pain of memory remained, but it no longer controlled him. He had transformed it into something else—a tool, a strength, a choice.

His own.

First time using AI to write a story. What you think? Kidnapping the cowboy


 I awoke in pain. Roped. Gagged. Hogtied.

The first thing I registered was the hammering in my skull, pulsing in time with my heartbeat. Blood had dried in a sticky patch above my left eye. My arms, wrenched behind my back, had gone numb hours ago. The rough hemp ropes bit into my wrists, ankles, and throat, the fibers catching on my raw skin with every desperate twist.

Rain lashed the tin roof of the old barn, the thunderous drumming nearly drowning out the voices of my captors somewhere outside. Water dripped through countless leaks in the ceiling, forming puddles on the dirt floor. One steady stream had soaked through my jeans, the cold water seeping into my bones as night fell and the temperature plummeted.

I tried to shift away from the growing puddle beneath me, but the movement sent fresh fire racing through my bruised ribs. Those bastards had known exactly where to hit—enough to incapacitate without doing permanent damage. After all, damaged goods wouldn't fetch the million-dollar ransom they'd demanded from my father.

The barn doors rattled against their hinges as wind howled through the cracks in the weathered wood. Dust and hay swirled in the faint moonlight filtering through the gaps. The storm was getting worse, and I was exposed to the elements on the bare floor, already shivering uncontrollably.

I had to get free before hypothermia set in. Before they returned.

My fingers, though numb and clumsy, found a nail protruding from one of the floor boards behind me. Hope flared for the first time since I'd regained consciousness.I worked the nail back and forth, feeling it loosen with each twist. My shoulders screamed in protest as I contorted my body to maintain my grip. A violent cough racked my chest—the hours spent in the damp had taken their toll. I bit down on the filthy gag to keep from making noise.

The storm intensified, wind shrieking through the barn's skeletal frame. A sudden gust tore a section of the roof free, sending a corrugated metal sheet clattering into the night. Rain now poured directly onto my legs, the icy water pooling around my body. My teeth chattered uncontrollably.

Finally, the nail came free. Clutching it between my frozen fingers, I began sawing at the ropes binding my wrists. The work was agonizingly slow—my hands so numb I could barely feel them, let alone control them with any precision. Twice the nail slipped, jabbing deep into my palm. I hardly noticed the fresh blood mixing with the rainwater beneath me.

A flash of lightning illuminated the barn's interior, revealing rows of ancient farm equipment and stacks of moldering hay bales. In that brief moment of clarity, I spotted something I hadn't seen before—a rusted sickle hanging on the wall just ten feet away. If I could reach it...

The sudden roar of an engine outside froze me mid-motion. Headlights swept across the barn walls as a vehicle approached. My captors were returning, probably seeking shelter from the storm.

I redoubled my efforts on the rope, desperation lending strength to my frozen limbs. The first strand began to fray. Then another. The nail sliced through the wet hemp with surprising efficiency now that I'd found the right angle.

The vehicle doors slammed. Voices approached, barely audible over the pounding rain. I had seconds, not minutes.

With a final, desperate sawing motion, the rope around my wrists gave way.I worked the nail back and forth, feeling it loosen with each twist. My shoulders screamed in protest as I contorted my body to maintain my grip. A violent cough racked my chest—the hours spent in the damp had taken their toll. I bit down on the filthy gag to keep from making noise.

The storm intensified, wind shrieking through the barn's skeletal frame. A sudden gust tore a section of the roof free, sending a corrugated metal sheet clattering into the night. Rain now poured directly onto my legs, the icy water pooling around my body. My teeth chattered uncontrollably.

Finally, the nail came free. Clutching it between my frozen fingers, I began sawing at the ropes binding my wrists. The work was agonizingly slow—my hands so numb I could barely feel them, let alone control them with any precision. Twice the nail slipped, jabbing deep into my palm. I hardly noticed the fresh blood mixing with the rainwater beneath me.

A flash of lightning illuminated the barn's interior, revealing rows of ancient farm equipment and stacks of moldering hay bales. In that brief moment of clarity, I spotted something I hadn't seen before—a rusted sickle hanging on the wall just ten feet away. If I could reach it...

The sudden roar of an engine outside froze me mid-motion. Headlights swept across the barn walls as a vehicle approached. My captors were returning, probably seeking shelter from the storm.

I redoubled my efforts on the rope, desperation lending strength to my frozen limbs. The first strand began to fray. Then another. The nail sliced through the wet hemp with surprising efficiency now that I'd found the right angle.

The vehicle doors slammed. Voices approached, barely audible over the pounding rain. I had seconds, not minutes.

With a final, desperate sawing motion, the rope around my wrists gave wayFreedom lasted mere seconds.

I had just begun clawing at the ropes around my ankles when the barn door crashed open. A blinding flashlight beam caught me mid-escape, followed by a string of curses. The larger of my two captors—the one with the cauliflower ear and scarred knuckles—crossed the distance in three strides.

"Thought you'd pull a disappearing act, cowboy?" His boot connected with my ribs, sending me sprawling back into the mud. The nail, my one precious tool, disappeared into the muck.

The second kidnapper circled behind me. "Looks like our boy's got more fight than we gave him credit for."

I thrashed wildly, my one free hand clawing at anything within reach, but it was useless. Cauliflower Ear pinned me face-down in the puddle, his knee driving into my spine while his partner secured fresh ropes around my wrists—these plastic zip ties, far more secure than the hemp.

"Water's rising," the second man observed, toeing the growing pool beneath me. "Storm's flooding the low ground."

"Let him get wet," Cauliflower Ear grunted, yanking me roughly to my feet. "He's caused enough trouble."

They dragged me to the back of the barn and secured me to a support beam, this time with my arms stretched painfully above my head. The position forced me to stand, my legs already trembling with exhaustion. If I slumped, the zip ties would cut off circulation to my hands entirely.

"Try that again," Cauliflower Ear hissed in my ear, "and we start sending pieces of you to daddy instead of ransom notes." He patted my cheek with mock affection before stepping back to admire his handiwork.

The water had already reached my ankles, frigid and rising steadily as the rain continued its relentless assault. By morning, I calculated grimly, it would reach my knees. By noon...

I closed my eyes, conserving what little strength remained. I'd failed this time. But they'd revealed something important—they needed me alive and mostly intact. And now I knew exactly where they kept the bolt cutters I'd glimpsed hanging from the second man's belt.

I just had to survive the night. And the flood.

Chain him next to his brother


 

They got my brother!